In yesterday's post, I wrote about some lessons learned from looking at landscape paintings by Peggy Root and figure drawings by Tamie Beldue. Well, lessons learned are not worth a hoot if you don't put them into practice. So today I tried some out. Yesterday's post had an image of a crappy landscape that I did in Florida a while back. Here 'tis:
Butler Beach Marsh
And here is today's effort:
Butler Beach Marsh, the Remix
I think this one is much better. Instead of trying to depict too much, I made the marsh grasses into areas of greens with soft edges. I also pumped up the value contrasts in the water and made the reflections better, both of the sky and grasses. And the treelines in the distance are bluer. The composition is no better, but that was intentional: I wanted to see the effect that this very different painting approach would have on the image. So the lesson learned is one that all the good landscape instructors have been telling me forever: get the big shapes, don't try to paint everything, and mind your edges.
I'm a slow learner ...